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Review of Shallow Grave  
Review by Bethlynn Bowman
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Gruesome--I liked it. You have a great way of setting up the story with not much other than conversation. Dave, I believe, may have a bit of the psychopath in him and I think you have a lot to work with if you decide to expand the idea. The only criticism I would offer is to go back through and check grammar. I noticed you used a "they" instead of "the" which wouldn't be noticed by a spell/grammar check. Great Job!!
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Review by Bethlynn Bowman
Rated: E | (5.0)
The lovely but sad imagery brings tears to my eye. I truly felt as if I was eavesdropping on her grief. Clear and concise, it was easy to catch the rhythm. Thank you for sharing!
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