|Wow Aimee! This is so powerful! Wow!
Flawlessly written and executed!
It was wordy but not long winded... I feel you needed the length to unburden our character sufficiently and honor her voice.
I have never experienced rape or anything near it, but have lived the experience with close girlfriends and I believe you have captured, most elegantly and with raw passion, what they went through... especially the first 24 hrs afterwards.
Thank you for writing such a brave and poignant piece... and giving words to a horrific experience that, unfortunately, too many girls and women experience all over the world.