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Review by Storm Grey
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
your story was really well written, and I really liked how you gave a short summary about the story before you started it. you also had good description and the story had good flow. the only thing i have to suggest is maybe explain a little bit more about the characters.
keep up the great work, and I hope quarantine is treating you well!

-Storm
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