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Review of Forbidden Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The title grabbed me right away because I love reading/writing about forbidden love and overcoming it in some shape of form. Your poem had an interesting take on overcoming it--and I like that. It’s very different and, personally, I thought your poem was amazing.

It’s very…strong that the guy “shook his head, a signal that their love was dead” and then have her start crying. You think that it’s going to finish off about how her life is over--BUT THEN she gets angry and sends his soul wherever it went. Very, very strong of you as an author.

It sounds like you’ve got a true talent, so keep writing and God bless!

With eternal love and blessings,
HannaTheWriter
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Review of My Daddy's Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Right away the title grabbed me. My dad means so much to me, so I automatically knew I had to read this poem.

I cried reading this poem because I know how special the father-daughter relationship is, and how sometimes we take that for granted. I love how the narrator grows: from baby to mom. So, so sweet.

I thought I had the perfect words to describe this poem--but truly there are not good enough words to describe how…wonderful and special this poem is.

Keep writing and God bless!

With eternal love and blessings,
HannaTheWriter
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