This is indeed a cute and heartwarming piece that depicts the imagination of a child. A nice allusion to Alice in Wonderland and the themes of the allusion is greatly adopted. I like the perspective change on the theme of going on an adventure. Way too often we go out and carry on all kinds of adventure, it's quite relieving to see that it is also a possibility to adventure by inviting new things in life. The white rabbit should return to all our lives and we should certainly accept it once again.
Strawberry tea is good with milk too, by the way.
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