*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Creative fun in
the palm of your hand.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/hbk16/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/6
Review Requests: ON
4,099 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... -1- 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ... Next
1
1
Review of VALENTINE  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
This poetic piece describes love and romance, especially during Vallentine's day.
*The style:
The prose is written in a good poetic style. There are many descriptions.
*The expressions:
They are meant.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is good. I like he chosen words and the definitions.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
2
2
Review of The Key  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
The principal character found some cut objects in the pocket of his old coat. The little key caught his eyes when he succeeded to read the carved words on it: "I have finally found you. We will meet in your next dream"
*The style:
The short story is written in a good narrative style. There is a live description. It is a monologue but the reader can see Celia lively.
*The expressions:
They are sturdy and thoughtful. There are many scenes. There is suspense somehow when he started to search in his pocket. The reader is curious to know about the objects.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job! I like it.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
3
3
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
The beloved had chosen to wait for her lover who is a soldier. The south lost the war but she won her lover. However, war remains evil harvesting lives in vain.
*The style:
The prose is written in a good poetic style. The rhythm is nice. There is live imagery especially when they met. It is very romantic. I like this juxtaposition of love and war that might signify that love can erase hate and war.
*The expressions:
They are consistent, descriptive and they bear both vivid emotions and feelings.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:

Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
4
4
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
A princess unicorn went over trees in a place that was far away.
*The style:
There is nice and lively imagery. It is a nice fanfiction.
*The expressions:
They are descriptive.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
The haiku style puts in juxtaposition two facts, elements, or images in opposition. Japanese haiku puts natural images or elements or facts in opposition. It means contradictory events. Modern haiku allows a large specter of opposition which is not necessary from nature. It might be brevity rather than haiku because I do not see the contradictory facts .
*Conclusion:
Keep on it!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
5
5
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
It is a live ants' conversation heard by the principal character.
Ants do not want to cross his desk because he will blow them all. However, they think that he does this because he is absent-minded and a daydreamer.
*The style:
The narrative style is consistent. The dialogue renders this short story vivid and lively. There is a personification of the insects the ants. There is live imagery too. It is original.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and live.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Very good and sweet job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
6
6
Review of Fight!  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
A great will to go forward within the dark and to fight so that the world would be better without hate; is here revealed.
*The style:
The prose is written in good style. You have used the figurative like similes.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and meant. I like this verse especially:
"Fight I'm a warrior, fight, I'm strong, fight I am large and in charge, I will not go back into the dark"
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
You have used several times the word "fight". It is a featured issue and I invite you to read my poems entitled The fight/ When you fall you get up. They both bear the same meaning.
*Conclusion:
Good job!



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
7
7
Review of blinded eyes  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Searching for another world in the sky because this terrestrial world is harsh and deceitful.
*The style:
The prose is written in a good poetic style. There is nice and live imagery. You have used the figurative like similes.
*The expressions:
They are, thoughtful and descriptive. I like the verse refrain (For I see the world through blinded eyes)
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
8
8
Review of Marriage Saved  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
A short story that reveals a dialogue between spouses. The wife has noticed a bad smell for finally realizing that it is her husband's sneakers' bad smell. She asks him to buy another pair but he wants to wash them and she requires that he will wash them in his mother's home.
*The style:
It is a good humorous style.There is live imagery.
*The expressions:
They are funny and the dialogue seems lively and credible.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
9
9
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
The poem talks about a fat boy who eats a lot and not healthily. All the girls love him and want to date with him even though being obese.
*The style:
The prose is written with a nice rhythm. It is humorous.
*The expressions:
There is a refrain. They are spontaneous and funny.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent
*Notifications:
You might add more short paragraphs. The poem suits young population. I would prefer that you said that girls do not like him. So that to render the poem educative. So that to let people especially young ones think about obesity and nutrition. ( sorry, it is just my suggestion because I see obesity as a health preoccupation)
*Conclusion:
Keep on it!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
10
10
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
You reveal the wild animals seen during your stay in Africa(Zimbabwe) for 27 years. You were lucky for seeing lively many wild animals like Leopard and sable.
*The style:
The narrative style is consistent. The description is rich and lively.
*The expressions:
They are descriptive. The reader can see many wild animals' pictures.
*Vocabulary/language:
*Notifications:
I have traveled to Africa during my present lecture.
*Conclusion:

Very good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
11
11
Review of A Peaceful War  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
War is one and remains such evil that harvests lives in vain. Indeed war comes for the legitimate defense to bring peace. Indeed warriors sacrifice their lives for this purpose.
*The style:
The prose is written in good style. I like the rhythm.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and meant.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
12
12
Review of A Short Story  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Being short is sometimes badly perceived. People can mock short people and short people can develop a feeling of being diminished. But, here the author reveals that the principal character does not let this to get a negative impact on his life. He accepts himself as he is and deals with others normally.
*The style:
The narrative style is good.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and convincing.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
Physical differences like financial differences can create troubles and conflicts within societies indeed. This could lead to violence. The main important thing is that someone should accept himself as he is and deal with others normally indeed. It is a featured issue that needs further debates.
*Conclusion:
Good job!




*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
13
13
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
India has been attacked by locusts.
*The style:
The vignette is written in good style. It is informative.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent. The information is transmitted directly.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
14
14
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
The first maps were conceived in at least 1400. There was a mapmaker named Walldseemuller and who was helped by a group of people named Gynasium. The technology and the digital have brought us online maps(GPS)
*The style:
The article is written in a consistent style. There are many historic information.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and meant. I like the debate you have opened about modernity that lets us get access to comfort without thinking about how humanity has achieved this. People during ancient time suffered and worked a lot and in collaboration even though the modest means. We are mostly consumers.
*Vocabulary/language:
The language used here is consistent and you have used some historic technical words too.
*Notifications:
This is studied and researched job indeed.
*Conclusion:
Very good job!



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
15
15
Review of Transformation  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)

The review by KHBEY:
review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
The description of the ocean tides that become immense because of a stormy day.
*The style:
The prose is written in a good poetic style. You have used the figurative like metaphors and similes. There is lively imagery.
*The expressions:
They are very descriptive.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
Some expressions and word that might be reviewed are "Freckling"?
"water freckling the shearing wind",
"Wind shearing the freckling water;"
*Conclusion:
Keep on it!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
16
16
Review of What is Freedom?  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Some open questions are asked here about the real meaning. The author might signify that is it eating hotdogs and doing picnic the day of the independence celebration, let people understand the real meaning of freedom or should people celebrate this day in this way?
*The style:
The style os this prose is simple. It is an interrogative shape.
*The expressions:
They are spontaneous and meant.
*Vocabulary/language:
*Notifications:
Might be more expressive. It is a featured issue indeed.
*Conclusion:
Keep on it!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
17
17
Review of My Two Satellites  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
You got married but you lost your job. After having two lovely children that you love and protect like a mother, you feel remorse about losing your career. The celebration of the Kojagori in your parents' home lets you meet with your mother and your sister. Your mother has sacrificed her dreams to raise her children and now she is not in a good social and financial state. Your sister is a good example for you of the woman who gets a child but a career too. She is happy with her husband who has a role because of his constant support for your sister. You decide to write and to take care of your children, finally.
*The style:
It is a consistent narrative style. You have put many details and have revealed some Indian cultural aspects.
*The expressions:
They are spontaneous, structured, and thoughtful.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
18
18
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Your poems will last overall and will bring happiness to broken hearts.
*The style:
The prose is written in a consistent poem style. I like the rhythm.
*The expressions:
They are spontaneous and very touching.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
19
19
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
WIthin harsh moments, a light appears and rescues you from the darkness. Lord The Creator guides and helps you.
*The style:
The prose is written in a consistent poetic style. I like the rhythm and figurative. You have used similes and metaphors. Also, there is a lively imagery.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and live.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is sturdy.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
20
20
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Rosanna is a young beautiful lady. She is a princess I guess. She is well protected by her dad's kingdom. Arrogant, smart, and powerful, she ignores all the charming men who dream of her. Trojan is special and it is hard to resist his charm. He knows very well Rosanna the powerful and arrogant woman, even though he dares to seduce her. He is ready to fight to earn this lady who said to him no.
*The style:
The fiction story is written in a consistent narrative style. There are many attractive scenes. The description is rich and lively. The story emphasizes very well the dual Rosanna and Trojan. There is suspense.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and render the scenes live.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
It could be developed further.
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
21
21
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:
review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Enders want to invade the universe and a big interest conflict is seen. But the universe's leaders want to save it and to fight against Enders.
*The style:
The fiction story is written with a consistent narrative style. There are many dialogues that make the story lively. There are many rich descriptions. There are many characters that make the story vivid. You emphasize well the evil ones from the good ones.
*The expressions:
They are solid and shape many lively scenes.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
The events are intricated and the script is somehow condensed. You might make more paragraphs and emphasize different dialogues and events.
*Conclusion:

Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
22
22
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
A purple balloon bears the family's memories. It releases happiness, joy, and comfort.
*The style:
The prose vignette is written in a good style. There are feelings expressions. Also, there is live imagery.
*The expressions:
They are spontaneous and translate such happiness because of the family's memory.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:

Keep on it!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
23
23
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
With your family, you visited Anderson school hotel during the first appearance of the COVID19 pandemic. The hotel was empty and there were discounts. You could visit each room that bore a particular history and the restaurant. It was a pleasant experience you had during the pandemic beginning.
*The style:
The narrative style is good. The description is lively and it is credible.
*The expressions:
They let the reader see lively the places you visited with your family.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent.
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
24
24
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
William had an alcoholic father who beat her wife and William his son every night after returning from the bar and bringing with him a woman( mistress). William lived a violent childhood that led him to kill his father and burning his corps. Violence leads to violence
*The style:
It is a sturdy narrative style. There are sad emotions and feelings. There is a lively description. It seems credible.

*The expressions:
They are transmitting many violent scenes.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is consistent.
*Notifications:
The story gets many violent scenes and I hate violence. It cannot be read by anyone especially young or sensitive people who cannot read it. It can get a harmful influence on young people and some specific persons. It is a featured issue about childhood abuse, alcohol, and bad and irresponsible parents.
*Conclusion:
It is a very consistent literature work despite the violent scenes.



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
25
25
Review of AN ODE TO DEATH  
Review by K.HBey
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)

The review by KHBEY:

review signature for Super Power Group

*The principal meaning:
Ready to the after death judgment, someone reveals this clearly because he thinks that he has purged all his sins and accomplished all his duties.
*The style:
The prose is written in a good poetic piece. I like this inner dialogue and rhythm.
*The expressions:
They are thoughtful and meant.
*Vocabulary/language:
It is fluent!
*Notifications:
*Conclusion:
Good job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
2,758 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 111 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/hbk16/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/6