Heady's (heady2011) Reviews

Heady

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#3516896

Review of Trick or Tweet

Review by Heady

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Even though I am only twenty-two years old, this is BY FAR the best piece of writing I have ever read. I agree with this 100%, that technology has already gone way to far and developed way to fast and like I said I'm only twenty-two and I just can't keep up. I never thought about a world wide internet virus happening until I read this, and I bet something like that could easily happen! If this were published I highly bet that it would be a top seller!

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#3496435

Review of The Rhythm of Thought

Review by Heady

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This is an outstanding piece of writing and flows very nice. The first line is mising the O on to. Keep writing! Nice work

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#3496425

Review of Reckoning From Beyond - Chapter 1

Review by Heady

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Very good writing. One thing I noticed was your spelt realize with an S rather than a Z.
I can't wait until it's finished and all put together.

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#3496420

Review of Reckoning From Beyond - Chapter 4

Review by Heady

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This is beautiful. I love this. I lost my dad when I was a teenager. When I was reading this, I do not think I blinked once. Very good writing.

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#3496370

Review of Let's Be Real

Review by Heady

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I really like this. I love the words you chose they were to the point. I really like and agree with the line where you say " The more phony, the more accepted." These days this is true.
"Make a valid statement of uncertainty found because, at this point, your artificial affection is getting old" My opinion I think it sounds better if you leave out "because." Just a thought.
Nice job

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#3496354

Review of "Justin"

Review by Heady

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I'm so sorry. This is a beautiful poem.

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#3495275

Review of The Secret of the Departed

Review by Heady

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I really liked the line "The secret kept closed, until the end told."
I think this would sound good also, "The secret kept closed, until the end when told."
Nice job

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#3495269

Review of How strange it is

Review by Heady

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really like the words you chose. The newer version is great!

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#3481258

Review of Kill Me With Your Words

Review by Heady

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I love this!