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Review of A Good Deed  
Review by Silenced
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Okay, honestly; I read the first few lines and saw zombies and almost stopped reading. I am glad I didn't.

It was a very good read. A few too many "Walking Dead" reminders but basically a good read.

The best part to me was the ending. This was certainly not what I was predicting as I was reading it.

I would add more descriptive wording to the surroundings, the description of the main character and the boy.

I am really glad I read it!
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Review by Silenced
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love this!!! That is something I never thought about. I often wonder what we will discover when our day comes to pass and our question are answered. This is very well written and it's true - dreams impact us all and without dreams; what would be the use?
Thanks!
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Review of Dumb, Stupid Luck  
Review by Silenced
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I found a lot of depth and heart in your story. Your attraction to racing and then to your two friends. It saddens me that you have walked away from racing; although understood. I don't know if the story is real or fiction but either way; it is an emotional story and well told.
If real, I hope life will help you find peace.
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Review by Silenced
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this!!! Great writing and intriguing. My favorite is the fourth section, "based on simple compromise". I would love to read more of your writing. Have you considered a book based on the poem? It is truly amazing and very well written.
Thanks for sharing your writing
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Review of Immigration  
Review by Silenced
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I enjoyed reading your comments. Immigration, being such a tough topic is always worth the read and the time to ponder. Sometimes, to me, it is not always about immigration, race, creed etc; I believe it is more about following the laws, rules ad regulations regardless of your race, creed, color, sexual orientation. If the rules are set that in order to become or stay and American; you must register, pay taxes, support yourself; then immigration wouldn't be the problem. America is home of the free; but that doesn't mean free from follow the word of the law. I am glad you are in this country. I love this country. To me; all who are law abiding citizens and truly love America, should be welcome
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