|All I can say is wow. This is an amazing poem full of emotion and meaning that tells a wonderful story of love.
Poetically, it's magnificent. The rhythm and flow was smooth and consistent, and I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors to distract me either!
It was very descriptive, and the language of each of the characters was well chosen.
A few of the point-of-view transitions were a bit shaky, but they were still understandable.
Overall, a very good job!
This poem is wonderful just the way it is. Thanx for the great read. I absolutely loved it.
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