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Review of In my dream...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely! I see nothing to fix. *Bigsmile*

And I'm glad you found a way to piece those together since I just pulled them out of thin air. *Laugh*

*Flower3*LUV~N~HUGZ*Flower3*
Hermione

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
All I can say is wow. This is an amazing poem full of emotion and meaning that tells a wonderful story of love.

Poetically, it's magnificent. The rhythm and flow was smooth and consistent, and I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors to distract me either! *Delight*

It was very descriptive, and the language of each of the characters was well chosen.

A few of the point-of-view transitions were a bit shaky, but they were still understandable.

*Thumbsup* Overall, a very good job!

This poem is wonderful just the way it is. Thanx for the great read. I absolutely loved it. *Smile*

*Flower3*LUV~N~HUGZ*Flower3*
Hermione

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Review of Out Of Range  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This reminds me of how I've felt about my ex boyfriend/fiancee. I have a few poems like this one in my own port. Writing them helps me to vent at times. *Smile*

This is a great poem with no spelling errors. *Delight* Good job! *Thumbsup*

I did see a few things that you might wanna change, though. *Smile*

*Right*In the second stanza, I felt the "that" was unnecessary and would be better left out. I think the rhythm works better without it.

*Right*I was expecting "and gave you my heart" in the third stanza, and the way you wrote it threw off the flow, in my opinion.

Have fun and WRITE ON! *Bigsmile*

*Heart* ya! ~Hermy
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Review of I Wish  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I *Heart* this poem! It is very heartfelt and touching, and I can truly feel the emotions you've poured into it. I'm reminded of a poem that I wrote myself not too long ago: "Invalid Item, as well as my most recent one, "Invalid Item. Perhaps you'll enjoy reading them as much as I've enjoyed reading this one. *Smile*

Your spelling and grammar are wonderful; I see nothing to correct. Your rhythm is awesome, and keeps the poem flowing right along as it should. *Smile* Great job! *Thumbsup* Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more!

*Heart* ya! ~Hermy
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