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Review by Hilda Agard
Rated: E | (4.5)
Living in Toronto, Canada, I can appreciate a poem like this. I however got a bit lost in the second verse especially the last line: "By that blowing silence (WITH) impacts like fallen eyelashes."
Is the word "with" a typo? Should it be "which" or am I reading the line all wrong? A very good poem. Keep up the good work.
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Review of A Little Soapbox  
Review by Hilda Agard
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very funny and very well written.
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