I like the moral of them poem and the Dr. Seuss rhyming vibes. It flows smoothly for the most part. I suggest rewriting the 3rd and 4th lines of the first stanza. They don’t flow as well as they could. Also there are grammatical errors here and there punctuation-wise. Thanks for the read. Cool poem!
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/holmes221b
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.37 seconds at 11:26am on Feb 04, 2023 via server web2.