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Review by Eliza West
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the moral of them poem and the Dr. Seuss rhyming vibes. It flows smoothly for the most part. I suggest rewriting the 3rd and 4th lines of the first stanza. They don’t flow as well as they could. Also there are grammatical errors here and there punctuation-wise. Thanks for the read. Cool poem!
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