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Review by Hopeless Hum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done! This was cleanly executed as a fun, quick read with a little twist that I certainly didn't expect. I did notice a couple of tiny technical errors (a run-on sentence in the second paragraph, decent in place of descent) but for a one-day challenge it's pretty tight.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Lovely. Very evocative. I noticed the first four were "rain" and the last two "rains"—is that intentional?
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