ok, as a die hard fan of Andy, Barney and all the others i was drawn to this piece...this is very amusing to me mostly because I loved the show...you could have lengthened this by adding a few characters like Otis, and Harold...maybe they were lovers and there on the couch when Andy and Barney arrived...but no matter i enjoyed your writing
i liked this little short story. it was entertaining too. i thought for sure her roomate was a guy named chester, so iwas very surprised to learn chester was a mouse-chasing cat. her mom was surprised too as the first words out of her mouth were;you dont have to take in a male roomate you can live with us.
I thought this was a very interesting read. Hard for me to fathom going over to the other side
and why it happens to some and not others but if it happens it happens. I myself had a heart
attack followed by 5 bypasses a week later and did not go to the other side. When I woke up
from surgery I did not think I was going to make it but I think my spirit canceled that thought out if you know what I mean
this was a very interesting piece from start to finish but there was no need for the f-words.
I think something else could have been said there that meant the same thing. realizing
this was an 18 plus rating wasn't ready for the f-words. Still I liked this piece- - -liked it a lot
I enjoyed reading this piece but I was crazy about the song I really, really was. As a matter of fact it was amusing to me. Thank you, I think I will print this piece so I can read it at my leisure
in my little ole efficiency apartment. May even hang it on my wall. Keep writing. I would be interested in any other songs you have written about.
read your very well done piece and enjoyed what I read. Its OK to be silly because someone
like me will connect the dots and say she was being silly and that can make someone like me write something silly. If not that's OK 2. In summary keepup the good writing.
I like this poem- - -I like it a lot. You did a very good job with this piece. I want to encourage
you to keep writing before I forget to. Of course, it is a sad piece but you know it is good to
read sad pieces just like it is good to hear sad songs. Once again very nice piece
I liked this little poem. It needed to be written- - -glad you did. I do not know too much about
a muse- - -but I know they exist. Could you explain it to me just a little bit. I am a writer and
just write what I create in my mind. I know there is a little more to it than that
This was a very very interesting read. It entertained me from start to finish. The concept was
brilliant, the the peoples and dogs names had rhyming to them and that is something
you don't get to read that much. In summary, great little story with a happy ending cause the
ham bone was was finally found. Keep writing!!!!!!!
I enjoyed this piece. There were a few mispellings but nothing major. Wish you would have gotten into Mr Slyvestor though. Maybe an update could be in the works. The concept was
good. Mr Slyvestor had to be pretty savvy to escape Scotland Yard I tell you that! I am sure the
whole neighborhood is on alert and a little unnerved.
This was a very interesting read for me. All those different pridicaments you came up with while looking for the sound kept me interested in your short story, I don't know how this could be made better as I rated it a 5.0. Your writing is superb on this piece. I've gotten some great reviews on The Perfect Hookup but I like your piece best.
I really enjoyed this piece. I did not understand what you meant by "Sunday Next". I'm thinking Sunday next meant the next Sunday after this coming Sunday but when you came back on the next line and said " two days away" was a little confusing. I still thought this piece was a very nice read. I read it twice because I am at the library and
i hear keys being pecked on both sides of me but I was impressed with this piece
I thought your item was an awesome read. I liked the concept and of course you had great inspiration for the item. It would have been nice to have some dialogue with my
pet. He could have told me this hacking I do needs to be seen about but I just thought
you deal with it. Once again a very nice read.
I thought the item was well written. Did not understand the dead waters of Styx. There are some mispelled words and even ommited words that left me putting the word in where it belonged. Of course, it is a very dark story with torture involved but overall a nice
read.
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