|This is dark. It captures the feeling of the disease in a photo and forces you to look at it.
Like " LOOK AT IT!!!".
Even though its a place of darkness, the words used are beautiful.
Eschew is my favorite. It's quite ironic, how the speaker is avoiding meds,
and starts to be haunted, and turns into this monster, and THEN calls to God.
I don't have BP, so I am ignorant, but the speaker seems self-destructive.
The closing line has this odd strength to it. There are these voices and morphing and mania,
pleads to God, madness, and unrest. But only "then I'm overwhelmed."
A story of a warrior. The more I read it, the better it is.