I stumbled across this poem, and while I find it well written and deep, I worry that I am not fully understanding it. I've re-read it only to feel like I am missing something, though I'm not sure exactly what I'm missing.
However, I do understand the join between our young social and world economical situation. I like how you've shown it as a loop, because I believe that is how our society works: in circles. Your voice is clear in this poem, and it makes unarguable points.
I also like the structure; for reasons you may not comprehend, it reminds me of Dr. Seuss. The continuous sentence is not often seen like this in poetry anymore, and I definitely appreciate it in this scenario.
Overall, job well done. You have given me much to think about, which I believe to the be the mark of an extraordinary written piece.