This was a truly fun read! Pun-filled and borderline lascivious. To me, it actually started reading like a children's book in the beginning then made a decidedly (and welcomed) left turn quite rapidly. :) Nice writing and good luck on the contest!
Nicely done! I appreciate that you utilized the roman alphabets in sequence for structure, and, to me, you accurately captured the attitude/identity of the colors you'd highlighted. My favorites were Jade and Lime, which likely says a lot about me. Haha! Good luck on the contest!
As a sushi aficionado, I found this article a joy to read, and chock full of useful information to both the initiated and the uninitiated in the art of ingesting raw fish. The description of some of the more commonly seen pieces of Japanese edible art was delicately presented and respectful in its underlying repulsiveness. Actually, I'm not a sushi aficionado--it was just fun saying so.
This is absolutely hilarious, Bill. I read this at the suggestion of Legerdemain, and I am certainly all the better for having done so. The humor was smart, and the comedic timing was priceless.
A big thumbs! Very well done!
Keep on keepin' on,
Sam
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