I love this lyric, it is so simplistic, there isn't a lot a fluff, but the imagery is spectacular. The lines "fiddle tuned music" and "bruised green sky" have to be my favorite, it not only paints a picture of this place but also the smells and sounds, quite simply I just loved it. That being said, I found some of it hard to follow, the flow just wasn't there to me, but I think that is a common problem with lyrics, they really work best when you can hear them rather than just read them.
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