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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've crated a very rich (haha, a pun) character here. However, Seto Kaiba will still be the only billionaire for me.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This makes me feel nostalgic for my university years. I felt stressed about papers when they were first assigned, but then I really enjoyed writing them when I got into the flow.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is very beautiful. Thank you for brightening my day and reminding me of the romance that exists in the world.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

These are some lovely pearls of wisdom. However, the last point concerns me. I spent 2009-4014 in an abusive relationship because I kept showing up for one who had done me wrong. Now, I'm in therapy for PTSD. It's important to know when to walk away, and don't hesitate to seek help.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This certainly catches a reader's attention, but I have no idea what "couples of ball" are.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for brightening my day and reminding me of the romance in the world.

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Review of Sky watching  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. I enjoyed getting lost in your thoughts.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I'm not a sports fan, so a lot of this is going over my head, but the grammar looks good.

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Review of Life in USA  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I'm sorry to hear that. Hopefully you will find better luck with another fandom.

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Review of 1. Missing  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This reminds me a lot of my early twenties. My ex-boyfriend was pushing me to write in coffee shops, but I never saw the appeal. I prefer to write just before bed in a paper notebook so I have no internet to distract me. Then, I got married at 29 and had a kid at 31, and breastfeeding prevented me from writing at night. I'd like to find my way back to writing eventually, but the kid keeps grabbing pencils out of my hand.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This taught me a lot of things that I had never known before. Thank you for sharing all of this.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very interesting story. I would run away, too if someone threatened to cut off my tail.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! I'm not familiar with the fandom, but the characters were portrayed in a dynamic manner.

Formatting tip: please start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes in dialogue. This is standard practice in fiction and helps make the piece easier to read.

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Review of forever lost  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've created a rich world with dynamic characters. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a lovely outline. Keep up the heard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review of SELENA  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I remember hearing about her from a classmate in elementary school. That must have been shortly after her death.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

It sounds like you've put a lot of thought into this. Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review of Six word memoirs  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

One of my university professors talked about the scribble and how there's no such thing as a true scribble for adults because of how we've been shaped by the world. This just reminded me of that.

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Review of Advice Not Taken  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I found this through the random “Read & Review” feature.

I am indeed blessed as well, though I only have one child, and I'm glad I waited. Even one child is very overwhelming for me, my husband was out of work for three years, and we've both needed therapy. I believe Husband needs more therapy than he received, but what little he did have helped a lot. Everyone has a different path to happiness and different abilities to handle the twists and turns of life.

Thanks for sharing your writing :)
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