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Review of Broken Controls.  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey,

ohh creepy.. good read.. nice flow and I like the dim font color I will have to try that..
I am no grammar king so I will not comment on that.. good read overall..
Just curious why the one big space in the middle between greatly and dissatisfied?
Much love write on..

RED

You IOU me One rr..
here is where i keep my newest stuff..
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey..
How cute.. but I thought I already RR it.. oh well.. good read cute story. Reese is so nice to his momz..

Much love RED
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey,

Ok why is the YOU cap letters?

LOL girl...you really need to get out some...

I would have given you a 5 but... odd!.....

cheers.. write on


RED
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really thought it was real.. you suck..

Great story.. good read, nice flow.. flawless grammar and execution..

Much love., write on..

RED
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