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Review of Baby Doll  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This to me is a very original poem. I feel like reading it and reading I have a different opinion,view of what the subject is and also what I get from it. I see dark feelings in it, self questioning and maybe hurting. It really makes me think.
Review of Lonely Hearts  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Love soul mates finding each other. Would like more dialog between the two and see how their backgrounds are different, but the same. With the feelings of loneliness and living with a caretaker that does not want them.

Would like to see how these two survive and changed the course of their live and stop the cycle Samantha is afraid she is starting again.

Noticed a few spelling errors, but nothing major. It was probably auto corrects fault anyways.
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