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Review of Spotted Satan  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a great tale from the pulp fiction magazine covers. This tale has been done before, but having a back story that involves the usual virgin sacrifice, the innocent kitten routine where a gullible family, with a young daughter, adopts Spotted Satan, they die, but the backstory on how Spotted Satan came about is pretty interesting. However, I enjoyed the modern tech pun that the main character has to adjust and the animal control part. Ha! That was great! Good luck and keep writing.


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Review of Ode to Work  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Haaa! Just another day at the office, with poetry! This is great! Perfect wording, rhyming is great and very spacious between the lines! I read this and thought about my days when I was working and I had a lot of paperwork to do! I can relate to this! Great job!


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for entry "Life Changing
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just entered this too! Ha! This is a short poem that clearly explains how a person feels after he/she/them won something. The words are simple, but it gets to the point without being too complicated like using big words that sometimes people don't know. Great job!


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a brilliant short story that is fast-paced and wickedly entertaining. I loved the ending that stopped at the right moment. You knew where this was leading when the little girl went to bring down the box where she keeps her doll in. It's like that famous "Twilight Zone" episode and I know what I'm talking about. Great job!


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  
for entry "December 17, 3018
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. This is a very interesting piece of someone who was important to you and never taught you this, but taught you that. And I liked the noted that are full of information in case no one doesn't know what the words or references are. Very well done.


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for entry "Divine Christmas
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very simple holiday poem using prompt words given for the contest. It screams festive and I can visualize everything that associates with the words and I can taste the hot cider. It also can make a great holiday greeting card because it's so beautiful that it's marketable. Good luck.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a brilliant piece of work. If I knew what the topic was, I would say a young woman/girl struggling out of darkness of some kind. Like a demon grabbing her by the legs and not letting go. I see this persom climbing and tearing away to her freedom. Well done.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I knew where the story was leading when they went to get pumpkins for carving. This is a modern tale that needed something other than the typical Transylvania tale, ex: vampires. As soon as I read about the quaint little town, I knew this story was taking that "tales of folklore superstitions" route and it was brilliantly done. Great job Jeff!


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really like this ghost story. Very old-school and I really like that you used history of the date of 1848 and the details of what it used to be for that ghost girl during that time. Very brilliant suspenseful usage because you know what's going to happen. Well done, Jeff!


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Review of Food Fight  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so cute! This could be so cute as a children's book and the characters of mood is brilliant.
“The herbs are in neutral territory!” Very funny that I laughed out loud! Fantastic story telling and usage of "puns" in each sentence. I hope you win because this is just great!


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for entry "Ho Hey
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What you wrote is brilliant. I'm a native New Yorker and I'm still struggling to make it big, especially the city where I was born and raised. But instead of Boston or Philly to live, give me Los Angeles. This was a very interesting piece that I enjoyed with the information given. It was very well written and a good read.


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Review of In the Beginning  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem very much. First you used God in the first paragraph and then you used words like black hole and cosmos, which I really liked because those two go together like bacon and eggs. Ha ha! I really loved the choice of the vocabulary that you used and not just with simple words. And another thing, the usage of the word "be" in the poem is very smart. Good job and keep it up.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is such a beautiful poem about looking to the moon's powers for their forgiveness only to be turned down. This what from what I had read. I know this is an entry for a contest but I would like to see more to express how you were really feeling to what you were writing about. Good luck.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like a eight line poem that is simple, yet smooth rhythm with the right word usage. I like you describing the horse, how you describe how they travel and their movements. It would be a great beginning to a novel. Like the first page before the chapter or how the chapter begins with a poem or a quote. Brilliant work.


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Review of An Apple a Day...  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is very interesting for the picture prompt that was used. I'm not very good with reviewing poetry but the rhythm of this piece may be a little off. Maybe it's the limited line use, or word use, or both, but this isn't bad. I'm not putting down your work I'm just saying that the last line was awkward. Thank you and keep writing.


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  
for entry "July 26, 2018
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! This poem speaks to me as a practitioner of Wicca and I really appreciate it! Wonderful choice of words. This is outstanding! The rhythm of the poem itself is music to my eyes. Cerridwen is a fantastic Welsh Goddess that I love next to The Morgan! Thank you so much and blessed be!


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Review of I Write In 2018  
for entry "Misplaced Trust
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the conversation between a total stranger revealing that her husband has a secret account and he was gone for five days. Great wording and it reveals the story without using any big verbs. You used maybe one or two adverbs which is prefect because you can have at least two "-ly" words in my opinion. Brilliant work.


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Review of Buyer's Remorse  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This short story is very funny at the end. I love the cleverness about it and using the math for the address. I enjoyed it even if it is under 300 words which is sometimes a hard thing to do. But this took a lot of thought eve if it's a very simple story to tell. Great job!


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is pretty good for a 7 line poem. I really liked the usage of words to describe the latest royal wedding, which I give it five years, ha ha ha. I was just kidding about that. This is well written and the poetry flowed and the rhythm was good for this type of poem.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really a great flash fiction story. I enjoy the character and her point of view. Great story telling and I can see this is happening. Brilliant work. I hope you keep this up. Great usage of past tense and words usage. Great interaction with the characters.


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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great poem of a past lover. Usage of words is really clever, especially when you used your screen name in the last verse. Using rhyme with almost in every verse is clever too. It didn't have to rhyme and when I read it out loud, it sounded different which I like a lot. Keep it up.


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Review of Don't @ Me  
Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great poem that looks like a song. I loved the choice of words you used in this poem and the rhythm flows nicely. It reminds me of the book The Secret and this helps people who are going through a lot. It's like you are talking to a person with poetry. Very good job.
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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very clever way to do a short story using a news report as a tone of voice. There are some stories that are true to this and there are no dress codes for having jeans below butt length, which should stop because I don't want to see anyone's underwear. Great job.
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Review by Kellie Burke
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Amanda, thank you for the eye opening problem for China's elderly population. The article is on point and it makes us look at our own cultures' respect and treatment for the elderly is desperate times (ex: USA, UK, Africa, Mexico). It is a very sad article that reaches out to an ongoing problem. Your questions, I hope, can be answered one day.
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Review of The Seventh Day  
Review by Kellie Burke
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A simple but descriptive short story of one man's survival that turns into spending the rest of eternity in hell, repeating the same thing over and over again. Brilliantly done and the grammar is good. It doesn't matter who the person is, it's what he's going through that gives this story some edge. Great job.


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