There is some awkward phrasing here and there like "to have a proper time". The second sentence could be rewritten as "I hadn't been able to sleep well since I started feeling like I was being watched a few months ago." This makes the sentence sound less monotonous with repeated past tense usage. Just something to be mindful of.
And I'd expect Rose to be freaking out of her mind, seeing a letter fall out of her bag. Especially in her private bedroom.
Other than that, the setup is engaging and I'd like to see where you go with this.
If my tone felt too preachy or berating, I apologize. That was not my intention.
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