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Review of Stuck On You  
Review by Kisha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it, can't stop laughing. I think this is the funniest story I've read on a long time. I think we've all been in a situation similar . . . maybe . . . and only to find out the truth in the end. people fall over themselves laughing. Don't stop writing.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is an interesting story so far, I like the characters and want to read more about them. You give nice details to put the person into the story, we can see and feel along with your characters. . . I will keep an eye out for the next part. also looking for more of your works to read.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wonderful, you have tapped into everyone's wish to do something no one else can. And to put in the one thing that can and would trap you if your not careful. I will head to your portfolio and read some of your other things, if they are as good as this . . . I can't wait.
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Review of The Witch Sister  
Review by Kisha
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a great opening for a story and will move further in . . . but I thought you would like to know . . . in the second paragraph there is a typo.
Nothing major.
Dan had her his mom say something about
Or Dan had heard his mom say something about
Like I said just a small thing.
Am going to move in now.
Keep writing.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful, I love it and enjoyed being able to see what you wrote. You tell a great story and are not over the top in places that need to be kept light. you have the talent to write and keep people enthralled. Don't stop writing keep up the great work and I can't wait for more.
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Review of The Sign  
Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is beautiful and painful. We always see past the obvious and try to find a more detailed thought or reason or way to do something.
I think your story is great and couldn't stop when I'd started. The detail is great and I could almost see the man running home for the sign. I felt sorry for the dog at the end??? is that normal? well you did a great job.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great idea, what will happen . . . well it's up to me to come up with something good. You have done a great job coming up with the story line so far and hope it is followed through by people. Is there a way to read the whole story as one when it ends. I wouldn't mind seeing what others came up with.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh dear, you are able to do what I found almost impossible when being taught in class. The story is there but made into a certain pattern that changes it. Thank you for the note at the end explaining how a Aquarian works. I like this and will give it a try later.
Keep up the great work.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow . . . when I started to read this I pictured my sister. She is trapped in a world that I can't help her from. She asks for help one minute and the next she tells she doesn't need any. even ending up in hospital isn't enough to break the false image she imagines is her live. If only . . .
Thank you for writing this.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great idea, will the powder really work the way he wants it to. will it make his wishes come true for him or end in a nightmare that he can't ever change.
I love the idea of having others let their imagination fly and see where it goes.
I will return and pick one and see where I can take it for myself.
Thank you
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Review of Bloomsday  
Review by Kisha
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I love this idea, she could be on the verge of an amazing adventure, or about to be drawn into a life and death chase for something. Who will be around to help such a lonely and shut off woman. I will return to add my thoughts to this line.
But which way will I take this pawn of misery . . . looks like I've made up my mind before I start.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really enjoyed your story, the characters jumped off the page and you could almost picture the changes in her skin. I can't wait for more, please let me know when it's up.
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Review of Mother and Son  
Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I did enjoy this, but just one thing.
At the part where you add a chapter, is it possible to have info on things like
Is Miles a boy . . . silly I know but by the time I got to adding my part . . . I'm sure male but to be sure . . . I didn't put a gender.
Do you know how hard that is.
Anyway, I had fun and will look in from time to time to see what's happening.
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Review by Kisha
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the idea of entering my poem to this . . . but what in the world is a b-link and where do i find it.
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