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Review by Amelia Janet
Rated: E | (5.0)
honestly, I didn't know what to expect, but this is amazing! Even though I'm a girl, The second part sounds like something my father and I would do. I love your poem, Keep up the good work!
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Review of Ocean  
Review by Amelia Janet
Rated: E | (4.5)
very short, very straight forward, and -honestly- kinda relatable
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Review by Amelia Janet
Rated: E | (5.0)
hey! I'm Amelia Janet , and im new to reviewing, so don't take me too seriously! overall, this was a very funny short story, but some places needed editing. some places include putting spaces in between the comma and the next word, like the following; "OW,that..." could be turned into "OW, that..." and it'll be easier to read. I hope I helped some! *BigSmile* *Reading* ~Amelia
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Review by Amelia Janet
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome place to earn a TON of GP! I recently won for the first time, and I just wanna say, THANK YOU, Sophy !!!! *BigSmile* *Reading* ~Amelia
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