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Review by Kit MacPherson
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this relatively well-written, with a satisfying conclusion. Overall, a good read. I did find the amount of quotation marks a bit jarring, the narrative would be smoother with a few less. Of course, the protagonist is a writer, so I suppose we should be glad they aren’t plagiarizing that lovely old lady’s words.
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Review of Why no Wimple?  
Review by Kit MacPherson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is why you never use common words in your summoning name! Forever getting pulled away from your dinner by rude idiots who don’t even want to make a deal, ugh.

I enjoyed this little story, and the ending was excellent. Thanks for sharing it!


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Review by Kit MacPherson
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another excellent ending, and the spots you've chosen for chapter breaks are really good as well. I liked the addition of Pegasus - I can definitely see him causing trouble in the future, he seems like he'll be full of mischievous fun. Again, I have to keep reading because the story won't let me stop.


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Review of Corona  
Review by Kit MacPherson
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can't say that I enjoyed reading this, because, well, it's what we're all living. But it's extremely well written. The line about the Kool-Aid got me right in my feelings, envisioning sick children. Really good job on this.
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Review by Kit MacPherson
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
If I'm being completely honest, I didn't expect to like this story as much as I do. I'm not usually into fanfiction, but this is quite well done. I don't know the world you're sourcing the setting from, but this story makes me want to. The polyamory is addressed fairly well, although it does result in a lot of characters, which can get hard to track. The ending has a good hook, it leaves you wanting to know what happened next. Overall, this was well written and an enjoyable read.
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