|This was an amazing piece. In truth, I almost cried!! I used to have an abusive parent, so I can relate well to this. It was very touching.
Though, at one point, I was a little confused. It was when Melissa was done talking to that lady, and it said,"But where will you go?" she shouted, after the woman." , even though it didn't say that the woman started going. (I hope that's not too confusing, but if it is, just disregard it)
I loved it. Well done!
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