A mite difficult to tie in the politics with the attic, but a wonderful collection of words and sensation, though perhaps the character is too overcome with the moment they're in. Would love to read more!
Blown away.
The colors of this piece really spoke to me. For all of my middle school poems, I have been unsuccessful at writing something so vivid and hypnotic. Thank you for this!
This is a very good story, starting out. Very strong, sure, but there's not a lot of that glance-over notice most people have. Descriptions of Giggles, for example. Great dialogue, and I'd love to read more.
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