Very Good. I liked the way it flowed along without breaking up. Yes, the voices in our heads whisper to us all the time, to do things, to not do things, etc. Is it our concience or guardian angel, who knows? Good Job!
Intriguing storyline makes me want to read more. The great thing about sci-fi...anything goes and this one seems like it's going to be one wild tale. Love the tough girl character, not afraid of a good fight, and the futuristic pirate aspect. Good spelling. Great Job!
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