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Review of Weapon's Weavings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked how you used alliteration at the beginning of each line
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Review of Treasured Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I loved it. I especially like the 3rd stanza
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Review of Mowing Blues  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
It was beautiful. I especially liked the 2md stanza
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Review of Jesus Called me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
It was beautiful. I loved it
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Review of Binding Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It was beautiful. I loved it
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Review of Dolphin Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very good descriptions
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The picture is beautiful. And I love the imagery shown in the poem
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The poem was ok and I liked the wording in the line "The Lord grants true caring
with rare gifts and flowers". But other than that I didn't really like it. Love is a really over played topic in today's poetry. Many poems are ruined when rhyming is included, but I liked the use of rhyming in yours like in the lines "But love, you’re a vision" and "our hopes, our decision"
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