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Review of Grey Lady  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
The fear is real, I can feel it through your writing. The visions dancing in my mind bring back my old childhood fears. My mom had a wighead I called Bikki. Bikki the witch haunted my dreams. Mom put her away into a drawer but I found her later, she was back to get me..
In your poem I can see the room, feel the warmth of the bed and the safety net of the covers, but knowing that If I got out of the bed the demons would get me
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
thanks for the smile, like the rhyme, enjoyed the parody. didn't quite understand where the writing came in, the milkman was writing, do the writers cramp, I understand we are on writers website but I think it would have made a better writing had you left that out
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Review of Another Name  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.5)
nice, picturesque, I can see the brilliant colors and smell the flowers, reminds me of spring time and nice and fresh.
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Review of Pelican Outlaws  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I like the spin on the old west, pelicans in black. I was thinking they all should be pink. but I can see this in my mind. a definite play on the old west!
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Review of Kevin 1967-1983  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
tbanks for sharing something so personal to you, I enjoyed the story, and your walk of faith which led to healing. I also enjoyed seeing and learning about some of the jewish traditions. I am not biased nor prejudice against any religion. In my recovery fellowship, the book tells me to be quick to see where religious people are right. I drank for many years after a good friends suicide, but my drunkenness didn't bring Matt back, I go to visit a tree at his parent's home where they placed his ashes. I have left tokens of appreciation there much like you did with the Grateful Dead Sticker. I can totally relate to story and appreciate the tools you use to work through your pain.
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Review of Cry For a Soldier  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Welcome home to all our veterans, and never forget those who gave the ultimate sacrifice.
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Review of A Hot Bath  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.5)
I can put myself "the reader" into your story. Knowing how great a bath feels after a long hard day. The soak in the tub always leaving me feeling refreshed, until the water turns cold and I am forced to get out and all shriveled up as if I am a prune. thanks for sharing your personal opinion of bath time, cleanliness and hygiene are important for us all, but thank goodness for the bath as the relaxation time is worth it all.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this reading,thanks for all the not so commonly known facts, I feel educated. You are wonderful.
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Review of Lighter Blues  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can see the flame in my mind, is the shadow on your heart caused by the flame, or the cigarette you lit with it lol, perhaps the tip lit the smoke and caused me to choke, the shadow clung to my right lung. :)
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
hahaha, I kind of saw how this was going to end. maybe got a bit repetitive, bending over to laundry, the paper etc. could susie have done other things to turn on jake, besides only bending over? bending over to the coolers. hmmm anyway. good story and humorous, but a little long winded to get the point.
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Review of She  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can relate, the relationship I'm in we were friends for 7 years I loved her and then fell in love with her and I still can't believe that she is mine. I fall in love more every day and she is the most beautiful amazing woman
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (5.0)
great story, reminds me of time spent with elder family members. the dialogue is grand as it adds to the story. city vs country.
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