Wow, what an introduction for Lafayette! Your writing, again, weaves the plot and characters with ease. I could visualise all this clearly and crisply in my mind from your descriptions. Very well done. I look forward to reading further continuations of this story. All best wishes, Musings
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Beginning with the scene setting related to the character, Mr Moonlight is shrouded in mystery, but we do learn something about him. I followed your writing with ease, and it's amazing how much is revealed to Maria in the space of this first section, but it doesn't feel rushed at all. I look forward to reading more! All best wishes, Musings
This simple poem has a clear message and flows nicely. I found it relatable, I have had the displeasure of a broken bed and this poem reflects that well. The only thing I would perhaps alter is the penultimate verse, where both lines use the word out. Perhaps "up and about" would be another option. Nevertheless an enjoyable read!
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/littlemusings
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.25 seconds at 2:25pm on Apr 26, 2024 via server web2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
My review has been submitted for consideration in "