Hey Crystal! I've noticed you haven't updated this with the edits we made. Are you waiting till the story becomes longer or did you just forget we are using Writing.com XD
Other than that, I can't wait to continue with this.
wow! Good start for your story and I like the creative name. Is this your first time writing a story or are you like me and have written a lot of stories that you haven't shared yet? Overall, nice story
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