This was beautifully written! Wow... you really set an example to others of what to strive for. I mean, it was sad, but it was beautiful all the same. You show a large vocabulary, coupled with a good plot and you put it down very well onto paper. As far as i could tell, there weren't even any grammar errors (i'm kind of a grammar nazi ^_^;;). I rate this a 5. Bravo! Keep up the good work.
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