I find the story full of wit and humor. It is smooth and fast paced. Michael and all the characters have their own individual personalities. I feel like they are real people and I could easily get to know them, and even like them. They are serious and silly at the same time. Well written, I will surely find myself looking at more of your entertaining short stories.
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