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Review of the dream  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (4.0)
nice flow
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Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (4.5)
I would have never thought to write about this. Nice job!!
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Review of Fighter  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome little story. Keep writing!
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Review of A Magic Trick  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was refreshing considering I haven't read something that rhymes in a WHILE. Loved it!
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Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nora!

I think everyone has their own "Neverland", whether it be a physical place or a dream that only exists in their mind. Excellent description!

Happy writing,
Estrella Mae
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Review of Choosey Lover  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (5.0)
"Everything that glitters isn't gold"
I like that. I could really relate to this, as not too long ago I was in a toxic, unhealthy friendship that I had to end. Keep writing!
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Review of My First Purse  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice message
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Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

This is great; very detailed description of a very personal battle.
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Review of Not A G.E.N.I.U.S  
Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (3.5)
I found this interesting and liked the use of questions. It really made me think. Great job!
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Review by Estrella Mae
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this poem. It's quite simple, easy to read, and has a really important message behind it. A tip I have is to add a question mark after the question "Who knows where I'd be" instead of a period but other than that I thought this was excellent!
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