Yes, I loved this. This is all about the power of mindfulness, of being in the moment. This morning I laid in bed at 5 am, just listening to the crescendoing cacophony of birds, and morning sounds of the earth awakening. Well written, and a joy to read.
Wow... very impressive. I love the way you write, it is easy to follow and has a lovely natural flow. I hope you can learn to embrace your obvious abundant gifts ... learning how to embrace the power of every moment, and the realisation that we all follow a very different trajectory. Your words resonate ...
Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed 'Progress'. I was quite taken by 'From limb to limb in sheltered shade/trees was serenade'. I absolutely love trees, so this spoke right to my heart. Written beautifully, with great flow.
I enjoyed reading this. I was actually in the crowded bedroom next to Irelle and Halman, as he rummaged through the closet. The ending is very clever and leads the reader to wonder if Halman is actually Tainia, or if Tainia is his ex-wife. The closet holds many secrets. Well done.
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