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Review of Listening in Vain  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful, succinct but vey powerful. Well done.
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Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crow,

Thank you for such a poignant poem. It is deep and very meaningful, and undoubtedly still very relevant for those who continue to fall through the cracks ... and let's face it there are many. well written. It resonated with me and my own life experience.
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Review of The Little Match  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, I loved this. This is all about the power of mindfulness, of being in the moment. This morning I laid in bed at 5 am, just listening to the crescendoing cacophony of birds, and morning sounds of the earth awakening. Well written, and a joy to read.
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Review of Selection  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jon Michael,

I enjoyed this, very well written, short and succinct poem. In four short lines, you have managed to capture the devastation of losing a loved one, juxtaposed against the irony of death sparing the 'mean, hard and cold' Well done.
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Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow... very impressive. I love the way you write, it is easy to follow and has a lovely natural flow. I hope you can learn to embrace your obvious abundant gifts ... learning how to embrace the power of every moment, and the realisation that we all follow a very different trajectory. Your words resonate ...
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Review of Progress  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed 'Progress'. I was quite taken by 'From limb to limb in sheltered shade/trees was serenade'. I absolutely love trees, so this spoke right to my heart. Written beautifully, with great flow.
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Review of OLD MAN  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Robert, I thoroughly enjoyed reading 'Old Man'. It was highly emotive, with beautiful flow. This needs to be shared with many, as its poignant message is powerful. Well done.
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Review of A Bracelet  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this, it flows well off the tongue. I could picture the scene unfolding. Well done.
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Review of Deep Thoughts  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you, Jacky, for your deep deep musings. I get what you are saying, as I too rely on spontaneity, and intuition to fuel my drive to achieve greatness. I enjoyed reading this, it resonated with me. Thank you. And yes, are we not all grains of sands tumbling through the multiverse?
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Review of Miracles  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks, Norman, I loved the laconic humour. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and laughed at the end. Thank you. The flow and thyme are good, it has a great melody for such a short poem.
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Review of The Dresses  
Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this. I was actually in the crowded bedroom next to Irelle and Halman, as he rummaged through the closet. The ending is very clever and leads the reader to wonder if Halman is actually Tainia, or if Tainia is his ex-wife. The closet holds many secrets. Well done.
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Review by Elska Hugrekki
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this .... the drama ... the rhythm and the flow. You have a very unique way with words. Well done!
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