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Review by matelot
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderfully descriptive poem about such a commonplace object. I enjoyed your prose as it described all the things that the radio does for you and how it gave an impression of how much you appreciate it and yet, the last line seemed a little melancholic to me like the last line of Ozymandias. I wonder if that is what you intended? Thank you for sharing this.
Review by matelot
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing this
it was a fun read not to miss
Whilst being entertaining
it was also educating
From your rhyming date reviews
I actually learned something new
about different types of poem
and how your sister is not all knowing
about dating strangers or strange daters
who fumble around after eating taters
and other food which you can't eat
like limp sausage or flaccid meat
but as the shakespearean poem goes
all's well that ends well with your dating woes
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