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Review of The Boy  
Review by MaxD123
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey,

I just wanted to let you know that this was one of the most honest and descriptive pieces of wonderful I've ever read.This was so beautifully written. I don't think Shakespeare could have done a better job. There were literal moments when my stomach turned because what you wrote was so powerful. This moment was when you were describing the way THE BOY looked at the stars, but not as a gaze, but more as trying to find answers. I fell in love with that paragraph and just think you did a perfect job describing the way human nature has evolved into logic. And that maybe even just a simple idea can be shot down by a few numbers.
Thank you so much for writing this. Never stop writing. Fly on.


-Max
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Review of The Night  
Review by MaxD123
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Really really enjoyed this! I loved the ending. Really beautiful! Thank you
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