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Review by MIchael Cannata
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I am the worst poet that ever lived, ut I enjoy reading poetry. I enjoyed your poem.

I like the image your poem evokes... but If I had my way it would be more effusive. Forever loves are rare... if you find one, I would imagine there would be more to say. Perhaps fleshing it out more would help. Not much... but add the right amount of praise for a love that inspires poetry. What number that is... I have no idea.

A nice effort.
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