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Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written, I really enjoyed your work, as someone who has been deployed on 3 separate occasions I know the feeling of missing home. Keep writing.
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Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked this. As someone who just recently turned 30 myself I can relate a bit. I've never been a big celebrator of birthdays but it seems to be the social norm to celebrate them. Sometimes you just don't want to think about it, but people spend most the day reminding you. Keep writing!
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Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really enjoyed this poem. The descriptions and imagery were fabulous. I wish I could have seen the solar eclipse myself, it sounds like it would have been an amazing experience. Keep writing!
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Review of My City of Dreams  
Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (4.0)
I do really like the flow and style of this one Although I can tell that you really care about your home and the problems that it seems all of us are facing these days. I would think a follow up about your opinions on the solutions would be very interesting. Keep writing!
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Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked this, it gave a pretty clear but expressive example of how it feels to put your work on here and brave the reviews. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Review of Our Own Paths  
Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (3.5)
I can feel alot of emotion in this piece. A future piece on the two paths meeting again would be very intresting.
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Review of REPOSE  
Review by PenMightierSword
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautifually written, with alot of strong emotion. Thanks for sharing you are very talented.
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