Aww That was such a sweet short story! It told me so much about the characters without even describing them! You know? Like I was unsure who was speaking at the beginning, I thought maybe two siblings, but then it was a husband and wife and you could just hear their love and appreciation for each other in the way they tease and how you added that they giggle and you just added a good amount of mannerisms without actually describing them. I like it!
Wow, oh my god. I am honestly at a loss for words. I love this type of writing. You had me hooked from the moment I started reading... My heart is still beating with the anticipation of it all. I am seriously struggling to find the right words to say to you right now as I just want to keep reading and feel taken aback by the fact that I cannot continue reading this. Well done. Megan
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