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Review of Shadows  
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I liked it, you got off to a good start. The only thing it might be a good idea to have a better "hook" at the very start of the story to spark interest. Like a mention of the rapes in the first sentence.

Keep up the good work.

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