I find it hard to distinguish in between the two as to gain experience is much akin to education, and education is simply a way to better your means of experience. I don't know if I'm making sense but it's how I feel about this and it's my reasoning for putting both
I Hope you're able to sleep better in the future, insomnia really sucks and I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. The poem is interesting though I feel a little short in the metaphoric imagery feels a little underdeveloped. Still overall good story and I look forward to your other works
That's rough man, I hope you can find an answer to your negative feedback loop. You did a wonderful job writing the poem it has good rhythm and does a wonderful job of expressing your feelings. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff in the future.
This was a fun story. I quite enjoyed it, The Rhythm didn't quite meet with what I was expecting but the overall structure is still good. I quite enjoy that you're talking about arachnids in a positive light, there's not enough poetry normalizing our eight legged friends.People are generally quite negative to the little guys I appreciate that you took a more positive to neutral stance on them.
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