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Review of GOLF  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great job with the poem. It felt like you have a similar writing style to me when i attempt poetry. Also it should be said i'm in temporary retirement from the game. Because as you allude to, once you start liking it, it bites you.

Regards

Nathan James
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Review of Never Said  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ella. I can only rate this perfect. Its so technically advanced. There's such a contrast in meanings with each line, that in a strange way marry up brilliantly. I'm sure other readers of this will appreciate the natural skill which has been evident in the last 3 poems

Nathan James
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Review of A Girl  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ella Viaja this is honestly, unbelievable. My favourite of all so far. Your way with words flows so well, which allows this poem to come and go with rhyme.

Nathan James
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Review of Clever Packaging  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (4.5)
Again i like this observation you show ella. Glad to see you're still concerned with British things. Nice writing.

Nathan James
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Review of A Rainy Day  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ella, this is so cool. From the first time reading it through to now - its really got something deep about it. Nice one

Nathan James
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Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (4.5)
Although i have come up with a seventh kind for your poem, i thought it is really well put together. Observation poetry like this is the best. A possible seventh could be; those who don't celebrate Christmas because of its pagan origin, in favor of showing kindness and goodwill all year round. Just a thought. Great poem.

Nathan James
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Review of Thankful Escape  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What a touching poem. Obviously from your poem it has made you stop and think when you're away from home, that while you can enjoy the sun, some for many a reason have to fight it, and in it. "Those ruled by the gun" line - good one. Sad that at the moment we live with this every day.

Nathan James
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Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (4.0)
Now this is the kind of writing i like. Extrememly observant, fully appreciative of the citys' history. Reading that, it was easy to begin to envision what the place might be like to visit. Having read that i wouldn't mind stopping by one day. Nice Stuff!
(2nd Paragraph - "to the East is the cold,-" i think you mean 'west')

Nathan James
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Review of Flight  
Review by Nathan James
Rated: E | (4.0)
Being somebody who is pretty much addicted to flight and flighing, i really appreciated the sentiments you were describing in your poem here. Its true, as you poetically alluded to the world can at times be much more beautiful from the air. Keep up the flighing!

Nathan James
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