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Review of Take it all  
Review by Natalie.T
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey,
Being a teenager myself, I thought you told the story really well. I think that you managed to show what life can actually be like for a young person, and the kind of stress they go through. Are you planning on continuing this? It would be really cool if you did.
Keep writing!
Natalie
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Review of Which Way is Up?  
Review by Natalie.T
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey,
I thought that this was very well written. I would probably read it if I ever got stressed! I think it perfectly describes how we all need to slow down, and take a breather. It's quite a beautiful (yet simple!) Poem, with I think adds to it's general flow.
Very well done!
Natalie
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