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Review by NathaniaLynn
Rated: E | (4.0)
This memoir was very touching. The story reminded me of one of my own, the breakup about the same way, although we never got back together and we had a very short relationship. It was still my frist relationship and still very special. Something I will never forget for sure, especially the pain of the break up. I felt completely there, feeling exactly what you had felt and feeling that it had been happening to me as well.

For improvement I would just suggest going through and searching out all the times you typed her name, make sure it is capitalized every time. I noticed a few times where it wasn't.

I hope everything is still going well between the two of you. You're lucky you've fallen in love so deeply and got that second chance.

If you'd like to appreciate my review, please review some of my things :)

Thanks for the great memoir,
Nathania
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Review by NathaniaLynn
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was great to read. I was very pleased to keep reading it. Having had a pretty rough time the last couple days it's been interesting to see how my own writing has been effected. I felt my mood lighten and I could almost see myself in these moments as if I was shadowing your memories, seeing them in real time.
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