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Review by Neda
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
nice story. love the way you developed your story through the dialog. it's great. congratulate you.
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Review by Neda
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
it's a good job, let me ask u something; why you use so many separated sentences instead of paragraphs? it makes confusion for the reader. I like when you don't choose names, but I like to know that why u use this method fore conversation? how many writings did u have had before? I eager to know more as I'm writing my 3rd novel in English, so maybe u could help.
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