Nice job! I loved how you implied that the power went out by saying that the candlelight reflects in your eyes. I also liked how you described a raging storm as a war outside and that you were a victim. The way you show how terrifying the storm is is unparalled. I found no spelling mistakes and thourougly enjoyed reading your poem. Keep writing!
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