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Review of Tears at Dawn.  
Review by NorahMae Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
Great poem, I lovee especially the last two lines: "The misty dawn is full of tears, crying in the rain.
Come to me and feel so free, I'll release your pain." - Really beautiful.
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Review of Precious Days  
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)
Really beautiful. Moving.
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Review by NorahMae Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Hello fellow Newbie!

I really enjoyed this poem. I loved:
"When the music is silent,
that pause between the last drumbeat
and the cheering, the joy, the screaming.
Silence. Complete command of the crowd.
Complete command of the world, for a moment."

You captured that feeling very well and just beautiful writing overall.
I also loved the way you ended your poem, the fleetingness of silence emphasizes its importance.

Great read.
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