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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*NoteR*This is just my opinion... It is only meant to help. Take it as you please.*NoteR*

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Okay, well, first off... I want you to know I love this work. It is wonderful.

This song, like all things, needs a bit of editing. Just a bit, in my opinion. Maybe re-work the structure here and there. Maybe have a few more lines on the first verse to match the second.

*Right*Overall...
This is great piece. It is one of those well worded songs where you must delve yourself into to understand the meaning behind it. Those are my favourite kinds actually!

*BalloonBl*I thank you for showing these lyrics. Nice work! Please keep writing!*BalloonBl*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautifully written. So beautifully written. I haven't seen lyrics or poetry like this in a long time. I love how I read this in my mind as though is was being sung. I really like the rhythm. It flows very easily. I don't see that too often.

Thank you for this!
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